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Fantasy Mrityu dand
Introduction story

Ye kahani ek aise ladke ki jo janam se hi maut uske janam khundali main sathapit ho gyi h kuch logo ka kahna h ki ye ye maut ka saudagar h kyuki janam ke sath hi apne mata pita ki maut ka karan bana
Uske mata pita ke maut ke baad uske sath kya kya hota h apko is kahani m padne ko milega uske maut se leke maut ka saudagar bane tak
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Update 1


Satyug ke ant m ek aisa rakksh aatank faila hua tha jo kisi bhi devta ke bas ki baat nahi thi usko maar pana usne devtao ki patnio ke sath bhi jismani samband banaye aur unke satitwa ko apna hathiyar bana liya
Is sansar ke par mukh sakti bhi uska kuch nahi bigad sakti thi
Ek din jab usne una ki is brahmand pe raj karna h to brahmand ki un saktiyo ke patni ko apne was m kar ke unke sath sambhog karna hoga. Aur unse jo urja nikalo ki usko apne andar samhit karna hoga, isi udaiyas se vo chal pada brahmlok. Brahmlok m ye kharab pahuchi to woh ke sabhi dev devi parsan hogye yah taki brahmdev v aur unhone apne aradhya ka dhyan kiya jo unhone upaya bataya uska palang kiya aur apni sakti teen hisse ka prayog kar ke ek dev kanya ka nirman kiya jo dikhane m brahmdev ki patni ki tahar dikhti thi. Usko brahmlok ka kary sop ke waha se adrishya ho gye apni patni ke sath. Jab wo rakksh pahuch to dekh waha pe bas unki patni h to usne unse sambhog karne ko kaha par jab wo nahi mani to ek bhayankar yudh hua jisme rakksha ki vijay hui aur uske baad usne apni haade par kar di unka sambhog ek maha tak chal. Us sambhog ke bad jo urja nikali usko grahan kar liya aur bahut sakti sali ho gya.

Aisa hi usne shivlok aur bankhundlok m kiya. Ab wo maha saktisali ho gya tha. Yahi ghamand uske ptn ka karan bana.aur uske soch kyu na is sansar ki adisakti ho hi parajit kar ke apne kabje m kar liya jaye. Aur wo chal pada is brahmand ke anti chhor ki aur waha pahuch ke usne adisakti ko yudh ke lalkara. Jo adisakti uske yudh ko swikar kiya.
Jab yudh arambh hua to iska koi ant hi nahi dikh raha tha ye yudh dwapar yug tak chalta rha ant m adisakti ne usko teen hisso m bhibhajit kar diya. Aur un saktio ko is brahmand m chhod diya. Jab ye baat brahmand faili ki us rakksh ka ant ho gya h aur uski saktio ko teen hisso m bibhajit kar ke is brahmand m chod diya h to usko prapt kar ne ke liye. Devlok aur patallok ke devtao aur rakksho m hod lg gyi. Ye dekh ke teen param sakti ko dar lagne laga ki kahi ye sakti kis galt hatho m n lag jaye isliye unhone us sakti ke teeno hisso ko adrishiya kar ke pritvilok ke kisi kone v chhupa diya.

Us sakti ko dundhne ke liye har yug m logo ne pras kiya parantu kisi ko v ye sakti prapt nahi hui. Aise hi kalyug aa gya. Is yug m kuch dost saktio ne v janam liya aur us sakti ko prapt karne ke liye pr kisi ko v wo prapt nahi hua. Isi tahar kalyug antim charan tak is sakti ko dundha ja raha tha pr kisi ko abhi tak nhi mila.

Kyuki abhi tak us saktio ko dhaaran karne wale ka janam jo nahi hua tha. Aur kahte h na wakt se pahle kisi ko nahi milta. Vaisa hi ho raha tha. Ab wo samay aa gya tha
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Update 2

Ek gaon ke kisi kone m ek bahut h garib pariwar rahta tha jo apne ghar ka gujara bahut hi muskil se chalta tha. Us ghar m hero ke pita karan kushwaha aur unki patni chandrmukhi rahti thi. Us ke dada ji shyamsundar kushwaha aur inki patni ka dehant inke bete ke janam lete hi ho gya tha. Aur in hone dusari shadi kar li jiska naam rukmani kushwah jo ki thakuro ki beti thi. Rukmani se teen bachein hue do ladke aur ek ladki aur ye teeno bache apne mama ke yaha rahte the aur un teeno ka naam bade bete ka naam rohit thakur chode ka aman thakur aur beti ka janvi thakur.

Ye teeno paiso ke ghamand itne chur ho gye the ki unhone bura rasta chun liya beto ne apne ilake ki sabhi aurto aur ladkiyon ka jina muskil kar diya tha kisi bhi ladki ko utha ke le ja kar uske sath milkar jismani sambandh bante the aur usko jab tak nahi chhodete the jab tak unka man nahi bhar jata tha. Aur beti ne to kisi bhi garib ko jab chahe marti jab tak uska man nahi bhar jata tha.

Pr wahi sabse bada beta karan kushwaha in sab viprit karan kushwaha sant aur aagya kari beta tha jo apni maa aur pita ka har kahna manta tha. Is liye usne apne maa ke kahne ek uneducated ladki se sathi kar liya. Aur uski ke satha apna jeevan vyatit karne laga.
Wo sab khushi se ji rahe the pr ke din unki khushiyo ka ant ho gya jab rukmani ki teen bache aaye aur unhone apne hisse ki mang karne lage. Jab rukmani ne mana kiya to unhone apne bade bhai aur uski batni ke sath bura vaiwahar karn lage. Jab man chahe apne bhabhi ko chhedna apne bhai se ladna ya tak ki unhone apne maa tak ko nahi chhoda tha kahi bara to uke chuchiyo aur chut aur gand ko v jab chahe hath lagte ya daba dete the
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Update 4
Character Introduction 
Raghuvir singh_ age 40 years good personality height 5.8 ft ek bahut bada business man h india m ye first position p h
Kaushal singh_ age 35 year dekhne m bahut hi beautiful h figure 34 26 38 h height 5.6ft ye ek house wife aur pese se ek dr h wo v neurology aur ek scientist bhi jo kisi ko v nahi pata h is bare m siwaye inke pati ko chod ke.
Rajvir singh _ age 40 ye v ke business man h inki height 5.5ft good personality but niyat ek dam khoti h ye apne bhai se jalte h aur unki sari property ko apne kabje m karna chahte h pr aaj tak safal nahi hue, aur baki baatein baad m pata chalegi ye kya kya karte h.
Manju singh_ age 30 ye rajvir singh ki patni h height 5.5ft figure 34 28 38 dekhne m ye modal se kam nahi lagti h. Ye v pese se ek dr. h. 
Chandan singh _ age 35 height 5.7ft ye ghar le sabse ladle h pr ye ek dam aaiyas h inki nazar apni bhabhiyo pr hamesha rahti h. 
Rani singh_ age 28 ye chandan singh ke patni h, MBA pass out h, aur khud ki software company chalti h height 5.6ft figure 36 26 39 dekhne m modal se kam nahi lagti h
Roshni sinha _ age 40 years ye hero ko badi bua h figure 38 26 36 h ye ek house wife h.
Ratan sinha_ hero ke bade fufa good personality ye ke business h, 
Reeta thakur_ ye hero ki majali bua hot and sexy figure 35 28 34 ye bahut hi chalu jiz h. 
Neeta kumar_ ye hero sabse choti bua hot and sexy figure 36 28 38 bahut hi chulbuli h ye sabki ladki h ye apni padi bhabhi se bahut pyar karti h
Abhi tak in dono ki shadi nahi hui h.
Hero_ Ayush height 6.2ft good personality. 
Heroin _ janvi kushwaha figure 32 27 36 ye garib pariwar sambandh rakhti h, padne m bahut tez h. BCA kar rahi h.
2nd Heroin_ mohini singh , ye bahut hi bade pariwar se sambhand rakhti h figure 27 25 30 h ye v MCA m h
3rd heroin _ riya thakur bahut hi simple h pr inka pariwar v bahut hi saktwar h
Hero's friend
Rohan kumar
Kamal singh
Jyoti sukla
Aajana pandit
Komal chaudhari
Hinna khan 
Sandhya 
Javed khana ye hinna khan ka bhai h

Vilan
1st king
2nd Rakka jo underworld se sambhand rakhte h
3rd Vijay Rajpoot india m top ten m se ek h ye software company ka Milan h. Ye bhi underworld se juda hua h
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Update 5 
Rajvir singh_ jab ghar pucha to usne dekha ki uska bada bhai aa gya h aur bhabhi sath hi unke hatho m do bacho ko dekha. Aur usne puch aap lo kaise h aur ye bache kiske h. 
Raghuvir singh _ gusse m kaha ki ye mere bete h. Aur tumhe kyu lagta h ki ye bete mere nahi baaki kisne to nahi kaha. Kuch samay ke liye ghar se dur kya raha tum kuch jada hi bolne lage ho.
Manju singh_ nahi bhaiya isi baat nahi h inhone to bas aise hi kah diya ye baat bas dalne ke liye kahi thi ander se ye v jalti thi unki khusiyo se. Bhabhi aap upar chaliye mere bhatije ko le the wahi p baith kr dhair sare bate karege ki aap in 4 salo m kya kiya waha rahe.
Kausalia singh_ apne bete ko le ke upar chali gyi aur apne pati se maaf karne ko bhi kaha gyi.
Neeta singh_ bhaiya kaise ho. Aur waha pe kya kya kiya. Mere liye kya leke aaye ho.jo ke abhi kahi barah se aa rahi thi.
Raghuvir singh_ ja apne bhabhi se le lena wahi tumhare ye bahut kuch layi. 
Neeta singh jab upar jati h to dekhti h ki uske bhabhi ke god m do pyare se bache khail rahe h. Apni bhabhi se kuch kahe bina hi un bacho ke sath kailne lagti h uski bhabhi ye dekh ke muskura deti h.
Kausalia singh_ kaisi ho neeta rani aa gyi gum k apne dosto ke sath. Kya kiya aapne waha p pr meet kuch jawab hi nahi deti h. Wo to bas bacho ke sath khailne m lagi hui thi.
Baki sabhi wahi niche baato me lage hue the ki in 4 salo m kya kya kiya waha pe aur raghuvir singh unki baato ka ghuma firake jawab deta gya. Sabhi uski baato ko maan v gye. Raghuvir singh ne ye bhi kaha ki bas aap sabko surprise dena chahte the isliye nahi bataya. 
Isi tahar ek week nikal gya aur samay aa gya bache ka naam karan ka.. Sabhi kaam thik dhang se kar liya gya tha.
Raghuvir singh aur kaushalia apne khandani pandit ke sath pooja m baithe hue the. Pooja pura ho jane ke baad bacho ko unke hatho m sa up diya gya. Sabse pgaye
beti ka naam karan kiya gya, pandit ji ne kundali banayi aur uska naam payal singh rakha gya. Ab bari aaya bete ki uski kundali bane m bahut hi dikt aa rahi thi. Badi muskilo ke baat kundali banayi gyi, aur uska naam rakha gya ayush singh. Sabhi ko khana khilaya gya jo v guest aaye the wahi dusri aur pandit ne ye baatya ki aapke bete ki alp aayu m hi mrityu ho jayegi.he sune ke wo bahut dukhi hue. 
Samay gujarta gya ek din raghuvir singh aur uski family ki kaam ke shilsile m kahi ja rahi thi raste m hi unka road accident ho gya. Jisme wo aur uski patni aur beti bach gyi par bete kuch pata nhi chala kyuki car blast ho gyi thi nich khai m girne ke baad. Prantu ayush wahi kuch dur ja ke gir gya tha. Aur bihos ho gya tha. Raghuvir singh aur. Uski patni aur beti ko hospital m bharti karaya gya. 
Dusari aur raat ke samay m ek car waha se gujar rahi thi aur by chance unki kar band ho gyi. Car garm hone ki wajah se. Nirmala tum yahi ruko main pani le ke aata hu. Thik h janeman (Santosh kushwah) ok sweetheart wait here I come back soon. Be careful ok. Ye kah ke waha se nikal gya. Jab wo pani le ke aa raha tha to use ki bache ki rone ki aawaj sunai di aur wo usi disha ki aur chal diya kuch dur jane ke bad use wo bacha jhadiyo m ek pde m lita hua mila . use utha ke apne sath le aaya aur apni patni ko de diya. Nirmala puja ye bacha kiska h to usne sari ghatana bata diya, nirmal ne kaha ab se ye humara beta h. Aur aaj se iska naam ayush kushwaha h. Aur use waha se le ke chale gaye
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Update 6
Jab Nirmala apne pati aur bete ke sath ghar pahuchi to wah pe pas uski naukrani thi. Wo kitchen m.kaam kar rahi thi. Nirmala ne apne naukrani jiska naam aasha tha use pani aur tea ke liye kaha kyu ki wo thak gye the safar se, jab aasha pani le kar aayi to use pucha meri pyari band priyanshi kaha h, to usne kaha school gyi h jo ki abhi 5 class m padti thi. Jab Aasha ne nirmala ke god m ek bache ko dekha to use puch hi baithi ki ye bacha kiska h. Nirmala ne sari kahni bata di. Ye v kaha diya ki ye kisi se bhi mat kahna kyu ab se ye mera beta h Ayush Kushwaha,
Wahi dusari taraf Raghuvir singh aur uski patni ko hos aa gya tha hoss m aate hi unhone apne bete aur beti ke bare m pucha pr dr. Ne yehi bataya ki. Beti ko abhi ta hoss nahi aaya h. Aur apka beta apke sath nahi tha ye sunte hi kaushalia singh bihos ho gyi.Raghuvir singh jo ab tak sambhal chuka tha usne apne bete ko dhudhne ka bahut pariyatn kiya pr hasil kuch bhi nahi hua. Ab tak kaushalia bhi hoss me aa chuki thi aur uski beti bhi kaushalia singh ne apne aapko ab sambhal liya tha. Raghuvir singh ne apne bete ki talash 5 sala taki jab use laga ki ab use nahi dhundh payega to wo yaha se london jane ka soch kyuki uski beti aur uske patni pr kafi baar hamla ho gya tha. Isliye ho yaha se nikal gye. Apne business ko apne bhai ke hatho me de kar. Raghuvir ke sath uski done dali behane bhi sath gyi
Wahi Nirmala apni hi duniya m khoyi hui thi. Wo Ayush aur apni nanad priyanshi ke dekh bhak m hi rahti thi. Ab Ayush v school jane laga tha apne bua ke sath. Jaha ayush 3rd standard m tha wahi priyanshi 9th standard m. Dono hi padne hoshiyar the. Jaha Ayush math m tez tha wahi priyanshi physics aur chemistry me.
Samay gurajta gya ab Ayush 12th ka exam de chuka tha aur priyanshi B.sc final kar rahi thi. Ayush apne maa nirmala aur pita santosh kushwaha se bataye bina usne martial art le raha tha sath hi networking aur hacking ki v. In chhuttio m usne apni maa se gaon ghumne le liye kaha pr maa ne mana kar diya ye kah ke abhi time nahi mil pa raha h nahi tumhare pita ko koi chhutti m pa rahi h. Wo waha se chali jati h.

Aur apne atit ke bare mai sochne lagti h kaise usne apne pyar ko pane ke liye apne maa baap ke ghar se bhag kar santosh se shadi kar li thi. Uske ghar walo ne kaha kaha nahi dhunda tha unko marne ke liye. Pr kisi tarah bach gaye the. Use wo v din yaad aata jab Ayush 14 ka hua tha us samay uske baap ke kuch logo ne dekha liya tha aur unki khabar uske pita ke pad pahucha diya tha. Aur uske pita ne uske bete ayush ko marne ke liye kaha diya tha ye bhi kaha tha ki ye ek hadsha lage na ki murder.
Aur wahi hua ek din Ayush kisi kaam ki wajah se raat ko der se aa raha tha usi samay uske pita ke adamiyon ne uske bete road accident karwa diya jo apni motorbike le kahi se aa raha tha. Itni tez takkar mara tha ki uska beta udte hui mandir ke andar ja gira tha jaha pe shivling tha uska tha shiv ling ho laga hua. Jo apni maut se raat bhar ladta raha. Uke pran ko yamraj tak hi nahi chhin paye the. Aur yamraj ji yahi sochte rah gye koi aye aur use yaha se le jaye aur main iske pran hran kar saku. Aisa kuch nahi hua. Samay nikal chuka tha kyuki subah ho chuki thi jab mandir m pandit puja karne aaya to usne dekha ki waha pe ek ghyal yakti pda hua h usne logo se kah ke usko hospital bhejwa diya. Jaha p uska ilaj hua aur use char din ke baad hoss aya. Yahi nirmala ke pita ne apni ye khabar us tak pahucha diya tha ki uke bete ko usne mara h. Jab ye kharab usko mili to wo bahut dar gyi thi aaj to uska beta bach gya. Pr kal pata nahi kya ho jaye uske bete ke sath. Isliye dr. Se mil kar ye kahalwa diya ki uska beta mar chuka h. Jab ye khabar uske pita tak pahuchi to uke pita ne apne adamiyon ko wapas bula liya. 

Nirmala aur uske husband ne raato raat us sahar ko chhod ke delhi aa gye. Wahi se apna chota moda business start kar diya jo aaj ek acha khasa chal raha tha. Ab unke pas kam se kam panch companyion malik the. Jis m se kuch garament ek software aur ke electronics ki. 
Tabhi koi uske room ke darwaje pe dastak deta h wo dar jaati. Jab palt ke dekhti h to uska beta Ayush tha. Tab jake uske chahare pr muskurahat aa jati h.
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Ayush puchta h kya hua maa. Nirmala kahti h kuch nahi aur puchti h bhukh lagi h kya.Ayush mana kar deta h. Maa chalo na kahi bahar khana khate h pita ji ko phone kar ke bula lo aur bua ko v. Uski maa kahti h thik h tu phone kar m jab tak ready ho jati hu, uske bad nirmala ready hone chali jati h aur ayush sab ko phone v kar deta h. Kuch der m wo ghar se nikal jate h. Ek restaurant m milte jaha p wo sabhi khana khane lagte h. Wahi p kuch ladko ka group tha jo ate jate aurto ko ched rahe the. Abhi tak priyanshi nahi aayi thi kyu ki wo abhi apni friend ke sath thi. Usne kah diya tha ki aap log chalo main v thode der m aati hu apni friend ke sath. 
Kafi der ho gya tha priyanshi ko phone kiye hue wo abhi tak nahi ayi hui thi. Jab Ayush phone karta h to uska phone koi ladka utha h jab aayush puchta h ki ye phone tumhare pas kaise aaya to wo ladka kahta yahi gira hua mila jo ki jhuth bol raha tha. Ayush kuch saka hua aur usne apne phone se uski location dekhne laga jab usne dekha ki location restaurant k bahar ki h to dauta hua bahar gya jah usne dekha kuch ladke priyanshi ke jabardasti kar rahe h aur priyanshi ke kapde v fate hue h. Kuch ladke uski friend ke sath v. Pr priyanshi ke sath kuch jada ho gya tha kyu jo unka head tha priyanshi ki chuchiyo aur chut ko masal raha tha. Jab ayush ne ye dekha to uska khoon khaul uth aur wo jake head ko ek panch aisa marta h uke pet m ki uske muh se khoon nikal jata h aur wahi bihos ho jata h ye dekh ke baki sabhi bhag jate h. Priyanshi said ke ayush ke gale lag jati h aur rone lagti h aur ayush uski chup karne lagta h.
Udhar nirmala ko jab ayush kafi samay se nahi dekha to wo waha se bahar ki aa jati h. Bahar ka nazara dekhte hi uske pairo tale jamin khisak jati h jo uske nanad ke sath hua tha. Nirmala done ke pas ati h aur priyanshi ko chup karne lagti jab tak uska bhai v aa jta h. Wo sabi waha se chale jate h. Uski frnd ko v ghar jane ke liye kah dete h. 
Jab wo ghar puchte h tab nirmala priyanshi se puchti h ye sab kaise hua. Wo unhe waha ki sari ghatna bata deti h. Ye sab sune ke usko bura v lag raha tha aur achha v kyuki aaj Ayush ne apni jan pe khel ke uski nanad ki jaan bachai thi 
Is ghtna ko hue pure 3 mahine beet chuke the. Ayush pure state m top kiya tha.aur Ayush ko fully scholarship diya gya tha govt. Ki taraf se wo kisi v collage m admission le sakta tha chahe wo kitna v mahnga kyu na ho. Uske liye usko kuch certificate aur kuch paper v diye gaye the, 
Ayush ne apni bua ke collage m.hi admission le liya tha jis ka naam MVN collage tha. Ya pe sabhi rich gharo ke aur kuch gariab ghar ke bache v padte the jo scholarship ke duwara admission liya tha. Ayush ka admission bahut hi assni se ho gya tha.
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Update 8


Ayush ab apni taiyariya karne lga kaise aur kya kya karega sathi usne apni martial art ki training pahle ke mukabale kahi jada kar di taki samay pr wo apno ki madat kar sake, jab se priyanshi ke sath wo incident hua tha. Usne fighting ke new and old skils kitabe online order kar diye the jo ab uske pas aa chuke the unhi se apni practice karta tha. Jisme Ninja weapon training kugfu mix fighting etc, in kuch dino m Ayush ne yahi sab kiya. Kal se uske collage suru hone wale the isliye wo raat ko jaldi so gya taki wo subah jaldi uth sake pr uske sath aisa nahi hua.

Ayush abhi so raha tha pr uska sharir pasine se bhiga hua tha kyuki aaj usne ek sapna dekha tha us sapne m koi aurt use apni madat ke liye pukar rahi thi. Ayush ne ye bhi dekha ki kuch log us aurt ke sath jabardasti sambhog kar h jab wo mana karti to use bahut marte jab tak wo un logo ki baat nahi manti. 
Jab uski maa nirmala jagane aati h to ayush ko pasine m dekh ke dar jati h aur use jagane lagti jab ayush jagtaa h to dekhta h uski maa samne h, jab nirmala puchti h ki kya koi bura sapna dekha h to wo kaha deta h aur nirmala kahti h ki aisa kabhi kabhi hota h. 
Nirmala ayush se puchti h ki kya college nahi jana h to wo kahta jana koi nahi h aaj to jarur jana h kyuki aaj mera pahla din h main isko enjoy karna chahta hu. Nirmala kahti h beta time 8:30am ho chuka h. Ayush kahta h maa apne pehle hi din mujhe let karwa diya. Aap side do mujhe jaldi tyair hona h. Itna kahate hi ayush waha se bathroom ki aur bhag jata h kyuki use pata tha ki ab usko pdne wala h. 
Nirmal waha se niche aa jati h jaha santosh pahle hi dining table p baitha tha breakfast ke liye nirmal apne pati ko breakfast deti h aur khud bhi le leti h jab wo kha rahe the tabhi ayush aata h aur kahta h maa m ja raha hu breakfast college canteen m kar luga aur wo apni ? bike dauda deta h college ki or wo bhi full speed m. College parking m apne bike park kar ke jab wo college ground ki taraf jata h to dekhta h ki uski bua priyanshi ke sath student ka group batimaji kar rahe the wo wah puch kar priyanshi ko apne sath le jane lgta h pr un me se do student aa ke ayush ka rasta rok lete h aur kahte h ki wo ye mala apne bhai ka h apni salamati chahta h to yah se chala ja nahi to tere liye achha nhi hoga, ayush uski bato ko unsuna kar ke priyanshi ke sath age badne lgta h pr un dono ladko ne priyanshi ka dupatta chhin ke apni head ko de diya tha. Aur usne us dupatte ko apni thigh pr badhan liya tha ye dekh ke ayush ki sar hi ghum gya ki usi kr samne uski bua ki itni bhaijati.
Aur ayush aage bad jata h pr priyanshi uska hath pkd leti h kyu ki wo janti thi ki wo sabhi rich family belong karte h aur jo unka head h wo ek don ka beta h. Jo wo nahi chahti thi ki koi lafda ho. Isliye uske yah se le jana chahati thi pr ayush ne jane se mana kar diya aur apna hath chhuda ke aage bad jata h

Dekhte h kya hota h ayush wo un logo le bich me is liye aap mere sath bane rahiye aur comment jarur karna
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Update 9

Ayush jate hi sabse pahle jisne priyanshi ka dupatta chhina uske hath ko pakd ek hi jhatke m tod deta h aur uske munh pe ek panch jad deta h aur ek laat uske pet m aur wo wahi bihos ho jata ye itna jaldi hua tha ki kisi ko kuch bhi samjha nahi aaya tha kab kya hua. Jab unka dhyan niche pade apne sathi pr gya jab wo lohe ke rod pr ja ke laga tab jake un sabhi ko hoss aaya. Uske leader ne sabhi ko ayush ko marne ke liye bhej diya aur wo sabhi ayush ko marne chale jate h un sabhi ke hatho m koi na koi hathiyar the wo sabhi mil ke ayush p hamla kar dete h.
Ayush un sabhi se ladne lag jata h ayush ne sabhi ko unhi ke hathiyaro se sabhi ko marne lgta h, ( ya pe un sabhi ko 1,2,3,,,,,,,,,,,,8 tak likhuga) sabse pahle 1 ne hmala kiya aur ayush ne nich baith ke ek panch uske pet de deta h. Aur uske munh se khoon nikalne lagta h. Aur wahi bihos ho jata h . uske bad 2,3 aur 4 ne ke sath marne daude pr ayush ne uchal ke ek face dusre ke munh p mar deta h wahi gir jate h ye dekh ke baki ke wahi ruk jate aur jo bache hue the sabhi mile hmala kar dete h ye nazara pura college dekh raha tha. Un sabhi ka ye hal dekh ke sabhi khush ho rahe the kyuki ayush un sabhi ko bahut buri tahar mara tha un sabhi ka ye hal dekh ke un sabhi ka leader jiska na Aman rajpoot tha jo apne baap ke gundo ko phone kar deta h, kuch hi samay m waha pe 4 jipsi aa jati un sabhi m uske baap ke gunde the. Wo sabhi Amaan rajpoot ka ishara pa ke ayush pe hamala kar dete h pr aur ayush un sabhi se ladne lagta h wo un sabhi ko kisi gajar muli ki tahr kaatne lagta h.ye dekh ke college ki kuch ladke bhi aa jate h unse ladne ayush wo un ladko ne un sabhi ko bahut buri tarah mara tha. Un sabhi ke halat itni buri ho gayi thi wo ab 6 mahine se pahle chal v nahi sakte the. Par wahi amaan rajpoot aisi halat thi ki wo ek saal se pahle bistar se uth bhi nahi sakta tha. 
Jab ye baat uske pita ko pata chali to wo sidhe hospital m pahuchta jaha Aman icu m admit tha. Apne bete ka ye hal dekh ke wo ek kasam khata h wo apne bete ko aisi halat karne wale ko bahut buri maut dega, yaha taki uske pariwar ke aurto ko rakhel banayega jo uske kahne pr kisi se bhi chodne ko taiyar rahe gi,
Wahi dusari aur ayush ko sabhi college ke ladko ne gher liya tha sabhi uski tarif kar rahe the. Jine ladko ne uski ladai m sahyat ki thi ayush ne unka shukriya aada kiya. 
Ayush_ hi I am ayush kushawaha ye meri bua priyanshi kushawaha,
Javed khan_ hi My name is javed khana h wo ye meri sister Hinna khan ye meri hi class m h 
Kamal singh _ hi I'm kamal singh and study in mca 1st year.
Jyoti sukla_ hi I am jyoti sukla and also study in mca 1st year.
Rohan kumar _ hi im rohan kumar b.tech in machenical 1st year
Anjana pandit _ mera naam anjana pandit h mca same batch,
Komal.chaudhary_ mera naam.komal.chaudhari h main bhi b.tech in csc
Sandhya_ hi mera naam sandhya h MCA 1st yrs.

Is tahar sabhi apna apna introduction dete h aur canteen m kuch khate h phir ghar ko chale jate h. Ayush ye sabhi baatein ghar p mana kar deta h batane ko aur priyanshi man jati h kyu ki wo nahi chahti thi ghar wale is baat ko le ke dar jaye.

Wahi dusari taraf sandhya apne papa se ye kahti h ki usne ayush se dosti kar li h. Ab apne bhai ke is halat kha badala legi.

Dekhte h age kya hota h ayush aur uske family ke sath, ye sab jane ke liye aap sabhi bane rahiye mere sath. Comment karna na bhule
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Update 10
Next day ayush college ke liye nikal jata h priyanshi ke sath. Par jab wo dono waha pahuchte h to ayush aur priyanshi ke sare friend wait kar rahe the wo sabhi ek dusare se halchal puchte h aur apne class ki aur nikal jate h. Pr aaj koi bhi priyanshi ke upar nazar utha ke v nahi dekh raha tha. Aur isse pahle sabhi usko apne nich sulana chahte the. Pr aaj koi aisa nahi chahta tha kyuki unhe ab pata chal gya tha ki uski taraf uthne wale hath kaat diye jayege 
Aaj bas class m introduction hota h isiliye wo sab canteen m aa jate h aur sabhi khane ka order de dete h, wahi ayush ke man m sandhya ke prati pyar ke bhaw aane lagte kyuki sandhya dekhne m modal se kam nahi lagti thi. Order aa jata h sabhi khane m busy ho jate h pr sandhya aur ayush bas ke dusre ko sabhi se chhup ke dekh rahe the. Wahi un dono ko priyanshi aur komal badi dhyan se dekha rahi thi. Uske baad wo sabhi apne ghar ko nikal jate h. 
Raste m priyanshi ayush ko sandhya ka naam le ke chhed rahi thi aur ayush v sharma raha tha. Isi tarah wo dono ghar pahuch jate h. Jab priyanshi ghar pahuxhti h to uski maa Nirmala ne priyanshi ke hath m ek envelope pakda deti h jise dekh kar priyanshi khush ho jati h. Kyuki uska admission oxford university m ho gya tha. Ye bad ayush ko v bata deti h aur ayush v khush ho jata h. Priyanshi ko ek week ke baad jana hota h. Is liye priyanshi ayush ko mana kar deti sabhi ko batane se kyuki wo un sabhi ko surprise dena chahti thi. Iske liye dono mil ke e plan banate h. Aur wo dono dinner ke baad so jate h, 
Next day ayush college ke liye nikal jata h wahi raste m kuch gunde ayush ko gher lete h aur revolver ke point pr rakh kar priyanshi ke bare m puchte h pr ayush kuch nahi bataa h aur wo sabhi ayush ko marte h pr ayush mar khane ke baad v kuch nahi batata h. Wo sabhi waha se chale jate h. Hinna usi road se college ke liye ja rahi thi. Road ke side ayush ki bike dekh ke wo apni car se utar jati h age ja ke dekhti h to ayush apne bike se thodi dur baitha hua milta h jab hinna uske pas jati h to uski halat dekh ke dar jati h usko Sahara de ke clinic aati h jah uska ilaj karwati h uske baad ayush ko uske ghar drop ke deti h. Aur usko Sahara de kar ghar ke andar le jati h. Gate nirmala ne khola tha jo bhi kitchen m kaam chhod ke aayi thi. Samne ka nazara dekh kr rone lagti h Hinna aur ayush ne badi muskil se chup karaya tha. Nirmala ke puchne pr bas yehi bataya ki uska accident ho gya tha. Pr nirmala ke man me apne baap ka dar satne lgta h.
Sam ko priyanshi aati h jab usne ayushi ki ye halat dekhi to use bhi uske college ki ghatna yaad aa jati h, aur wo v dar jati h aur rone lagti h ayush ke samjhane pr wo man jati hi.
Is ghatna ko hinna ne apne sabhi dosto ko bata diya tha. Aur wo sabhi milne aa jate the. Ek din ayush ne apni maa se kah maa priyanshi bua to USA ja rahi h ye baat hum kisi ko bhi nahi baatayege. Agar koi puche ga ki wo kaha study krne ja rahi h to australia kah denge. Nirmala is baat ke liye raji ho jati h. Aur usne sabhi ko mana bhi liya tha. Yaha tak priyanshi ko v sakt hidayat de digyi thi ki wo ye baat kisi ko v nahi baataye sath hi ye bhi kaha gya tha ki jab tak uski study complete nahi hoti wo hume se kisi ko bhi call nahi karegi. Priyanshi ko unki baat mani padi kyuki ayush ne apni kasam de di thi.
Kal priyanshi ko nikalna tha is liye sabhi friends ko ghar p bhulaya gya kyuki ek choti se party rakhi gyi thi.
Sabhi friend masti karti karne m.lage hue the pr ayush aur sandhya chhat pr the. Jaha ayush ne sandhya ko apne pyar ka ijhar kiya. Aur sandhya ne accept p kar liya tha. Raato party khatm hoti h aur wo sabhi apne ghar ke liye nikal jate. 
Agle din ayush aur uske maa priyanshi ko airport chhodne jate h jah uske friend v the. Priyanshi sabhi se milne ke baad sabhi se goodbye kahti h aur australia ke liye nikal jati h Jaha se priyanshi ko USA jana tha. 
Wahi ayush aur uske friend v ghar ko nikal jate h. Sabhi ek dusre se gale milte h isi bhi sandhya ne ayush ko ek chocolate di khane ko ye kah ke ye uske pyar ki pahle gift h aur ayush le leta h aur apni maa nirmala ke sath ghar ko nikal jata h aur raste m wo chocolate nikal ke khane lagta h ye dekh ke uski maa ne use pucha ki kya baat h aaj to apni maa se puchna hi bhul gaya, maa khaogi ki nahi lagta h ye kisi khas ne diya. Ye sun ke ayush sharma jta. Nirmala ayush ko pure raste chheti rahti h. 
Wahi sandhya apne pita se kahti h ki usne wo chocolate ayush ko de diya h. Jab puchti h ki usme kya tha to uske pita Vijay Rajpoot kahte h ki usme ayush ko namard banne ki drug nila hua tha jo uske khane ke baad ab wo 5 mint se jata nahi ruk sakta h. Ye jane ke sandhya ko v dukh hua kyuki kahi na kahi ayush ke liye uske dil m pyar hota. Pr ab sayad uska pyar wahi khatm ho jata h.
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